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Shadow; Hell; Playground in Heaven - Three Original Poems - Could I have your opinions?
Shadow
Be quiet now, and listen.
Do you hear the silence?
It is my heart, 'friend'.
My heart dripped blood, and it bled.
Though my heart was visibly bleeding, everyone only cared for you.
Was I, my 'friend', only a shadow in the shadows of night?
Was my blood, my 'friend', mistaken for yours --
Even though no wound on your heart, soul, and body was seen?
Am I only a shadow in the shadows of night?
With the crowd around us both, I feel as if all eyes are only on you.
Yet no wound, for you, is seen, but my heart continues to bleed so visibly.
Hell
If Hell is really like they say,
Well, then, I figure I'm only missing the flames by now.
Playground in Heaven
Bouncing bouncers of cloud, sliding slides of wind,
And spinning spinners of Saturn's ring.
Those are the games you'll find when you arrive --
At this little Playground in Heaven.
At night, when fatigue grasps you --
Well, God, He'll set you to bed.
The first poem had me intrigued, like an appetizer, but it had no resolution and so was incomplete. The rest of th meal was sloppy joes.
Either write something decent for the second two or just complete the thought in part one.
