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Can you give me feedback on this poem I wrote
good? bad?i'm so high
up in this big promising sky
that i almost die
when i try
to float down
to the ground
wanna get out of this
empty, lonesome town
where its all a blank face
cant trace
that emotion
not even a notion
this crazy world
so we'll swirl
twirl
in the clouds
here
you
and
me
FREE
with the illusion
that we're cruisin'
with a fast pace,
through a vast space
and now
we're lost
and toss
in our sleep
just a heap
of regret, sorrow, and weak
souls that are mold
from this flat base
where i pace
mind tight
like a kite
flying
eyeing
yet young
in the breeze that is only
a tease
i yell- held
by a string
alas,
i'll sing
this song but hope
you won't mope
for this terrible, terrible
mess
so rest
my wild
child
on this cloud
with me.
just be.
Make the rhyme more consistent and work on some of the imagery. Other then that, I can't see much wrong with it.
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